The earliest recorded German immigrants to Louisiana arrived inand Germans continue to arrive every year, especially in the New Orleans area. The fact that residents of German descent actually comprise Louisiana's largest cultural group is often overlooked, and it has only been in the last decade that scholarly forays have been made into this history. Courtesy of Stewart Eastman. According to Reverend Heinz Neumann, who maintains the Deutsche Seemannsmission German Seamen's Mission in New Orleans, "The two world wars contributed to the muting of this culture in Louisiana and America, so that many people are not aware of the German traditions here and the contributions Germans continue to make in Louisiana.
Darkness is essential to humans. Here, Bogard talks about the importance of darkness to humans. Humans need darkness to sleep in order to be healthy. Animals also need darkness. Ecological light pollution is like the bulldozer of the night, wrecking habitat and disrupting ecosystems several billion years in the making.
Here Bogard explains that animals, too, need darkness to survive. Overall, this response demonstrates partially successful reading comprehension. The response demonstrates no understanding of the analytical task. Instead, the writer merely cites two sentences from the passage, and offers a brief restatement of each point.
Overall, this paper demonstrates inadequate analysis. This essay demonstrates little cohesion and inadequate skill in the use and control of language. Overall, this essay does not provide enough evidence of writing ability to warrant a score higher than a 1.
His essay talks about so much facts about sleeping how so little can effect us health wise examples like getting sleep disorders, diabetes, obesity, cardiovascular disease and depression.
This facts helps people persuade the audience he also say that the world health organization classifies working night shift is bad. In his argument is not all about how it bad for the body he also claims and have proof that light cost are expensive and really costing people because they have light all night long.
He also claims light is messing with mother nature that animals need darkness to feed eat move around because there noctuaral creatures. He has details facts about human body, animals and about mother nature that he can use to support his idea of not using so much light at night and how we need darkness.
With these features he can persuade the auidence because people dont know why darkness can be good for us. He was all of facts and examples that he claim is efficting us and there world. On the whole, this essay displays only a partial understanding of the source text.
This facts helps people persuade the audience.
Other than identifying these as persuasive facts, however, the writer does nothing to indicate an understanding of the analytical task. The writer again mentions persuasion before the conclusion of the essay With these features he can persuade the auidence because people dont know why darkness can be good for usbut once again, there is no explanation of how or why these features are persuasive.
This response demonstrates little cohesion and inadequate skill in the use and control of language. The response also lacks a recognizable introduction and conclusion, and sentences are strung together without a clear progression of ideas for much of the response, the writer merely lists claims Bogard makes.
The response also lacks variety in sentence structures, in part because of repetitive transitions.
For example, he also claims is used two sentences in a row in this brief response. Weak control of the conventions of standard written English, coupled with vague word choice, undermine the quality of writing. Overall, this response has demonstrated inadequate writing skill. Bogard uses many features such as touch, feeling, seeing or even our own senses.
One of the senses Bogard uses within his essay is touch. He concludes that many species depend on the darkness. Darkness tends to evolve all over the world for a variety of things.
Another sense that Bogard uses is feeling. He compares the rythm into which light and dark days exist. Many medical centers have concluded that are bodies need darkness to produce many different hormones and to continue with processes to keep us alive.
Paul shows how many different characteristics affect how important darkness is to a human body. I think that this topic Bogard uses appeals to emotion to many different religious groups.
Giving evidence of a historical artist Van Gogh adds a lot of emotion to this particular essay. Comparing how cities and towns across the world are changing thier ways of light is going to be wasted.
He uses a lot of evidence with emotion.
Providing a variety of different examples on how darkness should be perserved gives a lot of power to the ideas that are expressed. This response demonstrates some understanding of the source text.
This writer provides a limited analysis of the source text.Albrecht Dürer reference, including his biography, engravings, paintings, and drawings. A Time-line for the History of Mathematics (Many of the early dates are approximates) This work is under constant revision, so come back later.
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